Developmental Editing Package Options

Manuscript Evaluation

(also known as an editorial assessment, analysis, or critique).

Includes a 4-6 page editorial letter containing actionable suggestions on major story elements such as structuring, plotline, pace, character development, dialogue, wordbuilding, style, and more.

Developmental Edit

(also known as a substantive edit or content edit).

Includes marginal comments throughout the manuscript, a 4-6 page editorial letter containing actionable suggestions on major story elements such as structuring, plotline, pace, character development, dialogue, wordbuilding, style, and more, plus a book map and a coaching call.

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"Allison has been exceptionally helpful in providing an editorial assessment of the first draft of my manuscript. Her advice and professional insight have given me a lot to work with and the reassurance needed to refine my manuscript so it's ready to be published. I definitely want to work with her again on future books and cannot recommend her enough!"

-David Marston 

Author of The Lucky Gambit